The bar chart indicates great difference between boys and girls in the sports that they chose to play in a particular country in 2000. According to the graph, the sports include cricket, basketball, tennis, netball, football and swimming.
As is exhibited in the graph, the percentage of boys who chose to play cricket, netball and football is far bigger than that of girls. That proportion for boys was at 13%, 18% and 20% respectively, compared to less than 5% for girls.
However, there are similar percentages of boys and girls selected the sports of basketball, tennis and swimming, which the figures of girls are slightly smaller.
The figures in the graph lead us to the conclusion that boys and girls have different fondness for sports. Most of the boys enjoyed playing ball games, while girls liked sports indoors such as swimming and tennis.
Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students the danger of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Many methods have been employed to reduce the juvenile delinquency such as putting those who go astray to prison or rehabilitating them by means of community service. Nowadays a new proposal that school students should be informed of the hazard by the reformed criminals has been put forward, which, in my opinion, should not be regarded as the first resort.
It is understandable that having the rehabilitated ex-criminals share the risks of committing crime can bring the criminal case to life and leave students a deep impression. Involving in the offences by themselves, the criminals are more likely to unravel the long course of their crime, from their initial motivation and the circumstances around, to their mixed and subtle feeling when violating the law, together with their confession in the court and their rehabilitation or prison term. This personal and detailed narration of criminals case sound more real and convincing, making students believe that how easy it is to commit a offence and how serious the consequence will be like.
However, as a matter of fact, I deem that effectiveness of this approach is quite limited and can even induce some negative outcomes. In terms of professionalism, the reformed offenders cannot elaborate the importance of abiding by the law from social and legislative perspective; rather, they tend to focus primarily on their personal feelings or bogged in some trivial matters. In contrast, if school students are educated by some experienced officers from judicial systems, students may more be impressed by their professional and well-rounded share and realize the deterrence of law. Besides, in light of the potential mental harm, those freshly released from prison may suffer from guilt when they share their illegal behaviors to school students. Citizens are likely to bias against the law violators and prisoners, as illegal act are culturally and socially indecent and unacceptable against some backdrop. In this case, the former criminals may be attached to stigma of being less well-educated or being impoverished, making them feel shamed and rejected by the society.
In conclusion, sharing risks of law violation by ex-criminals should not be widely advocated and better method can be taken to help students to become aware the importance of compliance with laws.
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