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雅思写作范文：长期离家工作的好坏

2017-03-29 14:49:24来源：网络 柯林斯词典

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　　Task:Today some person have to work away from his family, what are the advantages and disadvantages?

　　思路解析：

　　离家工作的好处1：培养了独立性。举例，这些人不得不依赖和挖掘自己的潜力和能力来应付一切生活中的挑战和困难。

　　离家工作的好处2：培养了社交能力。举例，他们要面临一个完全陌生的社会，和不同肤色，生活习惯和宗教的人群打交道，这培养了跨文化理解力。

　　离家工作的坏处1：家庭关系会崩塌。这些离开的人无力照顾自己的亲人和孩子，让他们感觉到被抛弃。

　　离家工作的坏处2：精神压力过大。长时间离家的人总是饱受思乡病，孤独和焦虑的折磨。

　　参考范文：

　　Nowadays, working in a new place or a foreign country distant from homes has been a heated trend in debate. In my view, this change simultaneously brings benefits and risks to these people leaving home, and my reasons would be explored as below.

　　The main relevant benefits are the improvement of independence and interpersonal skills. Firstly, being away from the comfortable and safe zone built up by parents and friends in homeland, people in a strange environment, especially the youngsters, have to take responsibility for daily affairs, tasks, behaviors, health care and schedules. These efforts can improve their self-care skills and decision-making ability. Moreover, living in a different cultural circumstance, frequently inevitable interactions with local peers and residents who have different skin colors, social manners, lifestyles and religions serve as a catalyst for increased maturity. In other words, after encountering with cultural diversity, these outcomers would become more independent, flexible, patient and adaptable, and acquire proficient social skills as well. Lastly, for people who live and work abroad, they can stay a foreign language immersion for a long term, thus helping them to master how to speak a second language natively.

　　However, the demerits associated with this kind of emigration should never be ignored. For one thing, as many people, especially young adults, leave hometowns for far-away places, they leave family behind. As a result, extended family systems begin to disintegrate. The result is often a lack of childcare and eldercare for family members. When a younger person leaves, marriage prospects for young adults who decide to stay sill decline.

　　For another, the second demerit is about a challenge on the spiritual level. Being isolated from family and motherland, an immigrator tends to be troubled in the mental stress. Specifically, the homesick, loneliness, frustration caused by cultural conflicts, and fear about the future always surround these helpless people, and give them psychological suffering all the time.

　　In conclusion, it is very hard to decide that advantages of this issue outweigh the disadvantages, or the reverse is true. Although such experience is beneficial for the form of independent and social abilities, as well as mature mind, the absence from home is detrimental to the people and their families.

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