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雅思作文写作法则概况

2020-06-29 17:32:00来源:网络 柯林斯词典

  雅思作文写作法则概况,同学们在备考雅思时,雅思作文写作有哪些法则呢­?小编针对这一问题整理了以下内容供大家参考,祝大家考试成功。

  Band 4

  Topic:

  Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree of disagree­

  According to universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. Therefore, this essay will show some reasons of argument for and argument against.

  Firstly, I will discuss about two reasons of argument for to begin with universities should accept equal numbrs of male and female students in every subject because it will be balance of idea while studying. In general, there usually are different ideas between man and woman. These lead to new ideas from different vision will happen. Another reason is it display that have equal of society not eccept in each side. In addition, nowadays, the most societies become to accept ability of both in any way.

  Secondly, I will discuss about one reason of arguments against that is some subjects not suitable for each other. for example, some subjects of sports such as weight putting. It is not suitable for female because there are different of body between male and female.

  In conclusion, I agree with universities should accept equal numbers of male an female students in every subject. Moreover, it depend on what the subjects that the students want to study, they can choose by themselves because I believe that if the students like to study their subjects, they will do it well so that I strongly agree with this topic.

  4分的原因:

  首先, 该同学在语法上的缺陷是致命的,多数句子都不符合英语句子结构的要求,如:These lead to new ideas from different vision will happen. Lead to已经是谓语动词了,后面再出现will happen就是错误的,要知道后一个动词需要采取去动词性质处理:This will lead to new ideas from different perspectives happening 其实这句话也很罗嗦,完全可以改成:This will lead to a wider variety of ideas.

  另外一句: Another reason is it display that have equal of society not eccept in each side. 更是无法理解了, is, display, have 及accept 统统是动词形态在句子中出现,但又没有从句将这些动词分开,最终连成功解密过无数学生天书的我也不能理解他究竟想讲什么了。

  非常不幸的是在中国庞大的考鸭军团中,有1/2以上的考鸭们写出来的英语句子与这位考生写的同样晦涩难懂。如果你的英语句子也存在这样的基本语法错误的话,我的建议是赶紧花上3-4天的时间解决这个问题,然后再move on到雅思写作上。


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