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雅思写作题目分析及范文：减肥与健康

2017-05-18 15:16:11来源：网络 柯林斯词典

　　新东方在线雅思网今天为大家准备了雅思写作题目分析及范文：减肥与健康，供同学们学习参考。认真研读一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以帮助我们检验自己的写作水平，并能很好地吸收和应用优秀范文里的优秀内容~更多有关雅思备考的内容，尽在新东方在线雅思网。

　　各位烤鸭大家好!夏天越来越近了，俗话说：五月不减肥，六月徒伤悲。而有的朋友们空有减肥的雄心壮志，不是管不住嘴就是迈不开腿，或者说体重基数太大，到头依旧徒伤悲。今天，我们就来分析剑桥雅思中的一道悲伤的作文题：不断增加的体重与不断下降的体质健康。那么，到底是什么原因导致了这样的局面呢?真的是吃吃吃和睡睡睡?还是有什么其他的原因?既然产生了这种现象，我们又如何来解决呢?动起来?跳起来?跑起来?接下来，让我们一起看看下面这篇文章是如何分析这种局面，又是如何解决这种局面的。

雅思写作题目分析及范文：减肥与健康

　　笔者以为，体重上升与体质下降问题主要还是由当下不健康的生活方式引起的。科技的进步为人们提供了各式各样的便利，从而也导致了现代人越发的懒散。他们不愿意锻炼，锻炼要消耗体力;也不愿意自己做饭，又准备食材又清洗餐具。他们只选择自己想要的，快餐方便，甜食可口。而面对这些问题，自然应该对症下药。多锻炼，哪怕匀出几分钟的时间。平衡膳食，既减少体重也锻炼身体。

　　下面附上具体文章，大家注意把握文章结构和具体内容，并关注这篇文章多样化的词汇与表达。

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　　There is an evolving (it refers to gradually over a period of time into something different and usually more advanced) tide in some countries that the average weight of people is growing but their health is decreasing. I think that the cause of these problems is due to unhealthy lifestyle and lack of exercise.

　　As people are getting lazier today, they want convenience in everything. When they return home from work, they choose to eat microwaved dinner or fast food as they do not have to take the trouble to prepare a meal or wash up after dinner. The introduction of fast food is also the main cause of their decreasing health. Nowadays, people are opting for(to choose one thing or do one thing instead of another) a fast food restaurant meal rather than a simple home-cooked meal. Sometimes burgers and pizzas may taste better than a home-cooked meal while think of all the huge calories swallowed (to make food or drink go down your throat and towards your stomach). Meanwhile the oil they used to fry the fries is literally (used to emphasize that something, especially a large number, is actually true) black, which is detrimental (causing harm or damage) to health. What is more, eating too much will also lead to health problems. Sugary drinks, packet chips, candies and chocolate are also some of the causes that contributes (to help to make something happen) to the falling health, because heavy consumption can lead to weight gain and diabetes.

　　I think that the crux (the most important part of a problem, question, argument etc) lies in the lack of exercise. Especially our metabolism rate will drop as we grow older. Even if we eat the same amount as before, we will still suffer from the increasing weight. Hence I put forward the only solution, to exercise, at least 30 minutes of brisk walking (a kind of sport, walk quickly). This target can be easily achieved, provided people do not drive to work. In addition, they can take a bus or a train come on the way, play with children or bring the dog for a walk, or anything to get attention away from the couch, because more exercise will suppress (to stop yourself from showing your feelings) cravings for desserts.

　　People should also balance their diet, for example, by eating more vegetables, fruits and less meat, and by drinking plenty of water throughout the day. Remember, we also need to cook healthy food ourselves to assure that our dietetic hygiene (the practice of keeping yourself and the things around you clean in order to prevent diseases) is guaranteed. This is healthy for body , and it is also less likely to fall sick (get ill) for us if the balanced and regular diet is kept.


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