课程咨询

雅思备考规划

扫码添加助教免费咨询雅思备考规划

扫码关注回复雅思获取最新雅思口语题库和备考资料

雅思写作语料(新东方版):幸福的源泉

2019-03-26 10:45:38来源:新东方网:薛鹏 柯林斯词典

  雅思写作考试中涉及到了很多的语料,为了方便大家备考,小编特奉上新东方网独家稿件:雅思写作语料(新东方版):幸福的源泉。一起来看看吧!

推荐:新东方雅思写作语料汇总版

  抽象类:

  Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success .Others argue that happiness depends on other factors. Discuss both sides and give your opinion? 有人认为幸福来自经济成功,有人认为幸福来之其他源泉,讨论两种观点再给出你的意见?(2009年12月12日)

  相关题目:

  Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on health. Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.幸福和经济成功关联,幸福来自健康,讨论再结论?(2012年10月11日)

  薛鹏思路拓展:

  财富为何是幸福的源泉:

  1. 财富可以使的人的生活自由,舒适以及帮助人去实现诸多的梦想,例如:环游世界旅行,接受最好的教育,享受世间美食。

  2. 财富是社会资源的象征,可以赢得别人的尊敬以及羡慕,可以带来成就感。

  幸福的其他源泉:

  1. 健康是幸福生活的源泉,失去健康,拥有再多的财富,名声和地位都是没有任何意义的。生活中很多的例子,企业家富可敌国,但是,健康每况愈下,身体的负担带来心灵的压力,他们很难幸福。

  2. 有了健康的保障,人会更加容易事业成功家庭幸福,因为健康可以使人精力充沛地应对事业的挑战以及乐观地实现家庭的和谐。

  3. 一个身心健康的人一定是一个乐观自信的人,他开朗的性格会帮助他扩大交友圈,好友的增加自然带来生活的乐趣。

  薛鹏原创语料库:

  1. happiness = sense of happiness n 幸福

  2. happiness = well-being = pleasure n快乐

  3. happiness index n幸福指数

  4. economic success = economic achievement n经济成就

  5. have large sums of money = own a great deal of wealth v 拥有财富

  6. have deep pockets = have money to burn v 财力雄厚

  7. wholesome physique and mentality n健康的身心

  8. is closely related to = is associated with 和……相关

  9. have little correlation to …… v和……不相关联

  10. …… is a more essential factor in achieving happiness ……是获得幸福更加重要的因素

  11. strengthen one’s sense of fulfillment v增强人的成就感

  12. earn respect and admiration from others v赢得别人的尊敬和羡慕

  13. fulfill one’s many wonderful dreams v实现诸多的美丽梦想

  14. travel all around the globe v环球旅行

  15. enjoy the delicious / delectable/ tasty foods in the world v享受世间美食

  薛鹏原创句型语料库:

  1. Perhaps no issue has led to such an endless debate as to whether or not …… 也许没有什么像……一样引起无休止的争论。

  2. Standards towards happiness differ widely from person to person .人们对于幸福的标准是仁者见仁智者见智。

  3. Happiness lies, first of all, in health. 健康是幸福生活的本源。

  4. Under no circumstances can ignore the immense value of health management. 任何情况下不能忽视健康管理的巨大价值。

  5. Health enables one to brave the career challenges energetically and harmonize the family life optimistically 健康可以使人精力充沛地应对事业的挑战以及乐观地实现家庭的和谐。

  薛鹏原创范文赏析:

  首段:背景介绍 + 争议焦点 +作家立场

  People have been pondering for years the connotation of true happiness. Perhaps no issue has led to such an end less debate as to whether or not large sums of money could directly bring people well-being. Standards towards happiness differ widely from person to person. My view is that the sense of well-being could derive from wealth, however, other more significant factors have more indispensable roles to play in enhancing one’s happiness index.

  二段:论证财富为何是幸福的源泉

  Indeed, happiness do closely relate to economic achievement to some extent because a great amount of wealth can make people’s life more enjoyable, comfortable and free. To be more specific, one can fulfill his many dreams such as receiving fine education and traveling around the globe if he or she has deep pocket. Still, economic success implies high social status, which can bring people the sense of happiness and even earn respect from others.

  三段:论证幸福更加重要的源泉

  Notwithstanding all that, there is no definite correlation between the amount of one’s wealth and his or her happiness index. Happiness,sometimes, does not depend on economic success but completely on wholesome physique and mentality. First, happiness lies in health. More precisely, wealth, fame, or status will be of little meaning if one fails to ensure his health. To illustrate, some affluent enterprisers have money to burn, yet, they are basically unhappy due to the deteriorating health condition and huge mental pressure. Further, health ensures career success and family harmony. In other words, health enables one to brave the career challenges energetically and harmonize the family life optimistically. Ultimately, those who enjoy good health must be confident and optimistic, their pleasant characters can help them enlarge circle of friends. The multiplication of close friends will brighten their spirit and sweeten their lives.

  尾段:亮明观点+总结理由

  In the final analysis, I re-affirm my conviction that happiness is not only related to economic success but also links to health, which is more significant. Only by means of owing desirable health condition can we enjoy the lifelong sense of pleasure although wealth sometimes indicates the source of happiness.

  作者介绍:

  新东方网专栏作家:薛鹏(@雅思小鹏哥),吉林大学外国语言学及应用语言学硕士。17年英语教学经验 (7年新东方雅思托福SAT教学经历),前长春新东方功勋教师,多次培训出雅思和托福高分学员(雅思7.5分,托福29分)。

  爱生活,爱运动,爱音乐电影,爱旅行美食,爱读书摄影,更爱英语教学。20岁登上英语讲台,主讲英语万词速记课程。熟悉GRE、TOEFL、SAT、TEM、CET等各级别词汇教学。

  大一时即在报刊杂志上主持“英语学习系列谈”以及“薛鹏教你学单词”等专栏。2006年获得“外研社/朗文杯”新概念背诵大赛吉林省赛区大学成人组冠军,全国总决赛大学成人组二等奖。

  对于各类写作课程有精深研究,授课方式行云流水,妙语连珠,知识底蕴深厚,对学员极具有启迪性和激励性。

  教学理念:Education is not the filling of a pail but the lighting of a fire.(教育不是注满一桶水,而是点燃一把火)


本文关键字: 雅思写作语料

为你特别匹配的雅思超值课程,祝你和雅思分手!
  • 新东方4月雅思公开讲座

    新东方雅思4月公开讲座

    新东方教师直播教你全科技巧!

    每天1小时

    查看详情
  • 雅思机考实战

    雅思机考实战

    剑桥雅思正版题目机考实战!

    每天1小时

    查看详情
  • 【知心雅思】6分录播课 (A类)

    【知心雅思】6分录播课 (A类)

    适合人群:想要冲6分的考生

    课时:434

    查看详情
  • 【知心雅思】6.5分录播课 (A类)

    【知心雅思】6.5分录播课 (A类)

    适合人群:想要冲6.5分的考生

    课时:464

    查看详情
  • 【知心雅思】7分录播课 (A类)

    【知心雅思】7分录播课 (A类)

    适合人群:想要冲7分的考生

    课时:443

    查看详情
雅思备考资料包

扫码添加助教

免费获取雅思备考资料包

更多资料
更多>>
更多内容

移动学习

二维码

2024年1月-4月雅思口语题库

扫码添加助教号 回复【新题】 即可领取
更多>>
更多公开讲座>>

2024年雅思考试重点题

微信添加助教 回复【考试重点题】

助教微信
更多>>
更多资料