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2021年9月16雅思大作文范文:离开家里生活是否更好

2021-10-08 18:32:00来源:新东方在线雅思 柯林斯词典

2021年9月16日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task2::离开家里生活是否更好相关范文,供雅思考生参考。

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In some countries, university students live at home, while in other countries, university students go to other cities rather than live with their family.

Do you think the benefits of living away from home outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

社会类

【题目解析】

题目大意:在一些国家,大学生住在家里,而在另外一些国家,大学生去其他城市,不和家庭成员住在一起。你认为离开家里生活带来的好处是否大于问题?

题型特点:利弊比较类题型,需要围绕题目所给现象提出其带来的优点和缺点,并进行展开讨论。

本文论文推进:开头段引入话题。让步段说明离家居住存在一定弊端,比如疏远了和家人的关系,立论段说明对于大学生而言,这种决定带来更多利处,比如提高社交能力以及独立性等。结尾重申观点。

【难点】题目针对的群体是university students,即讨论对于大学生而言,离开家里生活带来的利弊比较,注意结合群体特征进行针对性的讨论说明。

【写作思路】

开头段:大学时光是学生成长成才的重要阶段。不同的学生对于是否在大学阶段离家生活有不同的选择。就我而言,这一决定利大于弊。

让步段:诚然,大学生离开家会一定程度上导致家庭关系疏远。很明显,远距离容易导致关系疏远,因为家庭成员都各自忙碌,尤其是那些满心期待加入新鲜大学生活的学生。因此,缺乏及时的沟通和有效的交流会导致疏远的家庭关系,在没有家庭成员陪伴和支持的情况下,更加加剧了大学生的孤独感。

主体段:但是,我们不应该忽略当大学生选择离开家庭的庇护也会有潜在的好处。一方面,大学生可以抓住这个机会提高人际交往技能,这将成为他们在未来激烈竞争环境下的有利优势。离家在外为他们创造了和同龄人交流的机会,而不是花费大量的时间在家庭琐事上,这意味着大学生在这个微型社会里会逐步提高沟通能力、解决问题能力以及合作能力等,为未来融入社会打下良好基础。另一方面,当离家在外,个人独立性可以被激发并培养,这也被视作成人的标志。一旦大学生有了独立的意识,他们就能逐步掌握独立处理问题或者独立判断的技能。

结尾段:总的来说,对于大学生而言,离家在外的确会产生更多积极影响,尤其是提高人际交往能力和自主性,尽管他们也需要注意维持良好的家庭关系。

【参考范文】

The college years are regarded as a critical period for students' growth and accomplishment. Different university students make their own choices about whether to live away from home when being educated. From my perspective, the decision of leaving home certainly brings more benefits than drawbacks.

Admittedly, university students' living away from home may, to some extent, lead to family alienation. It seems clear that the long distance easily breeds the estrangement considering that family members are all engaged in their own schedule, especially those young people who are readily involved in the fresh and brilliant college life. Therefore, it is the lack of timely effective communication that is likely to result in distant family relationship, exacerbating the sense of loneliness among university students when losing the company and support from family members.

However, we should not ignore the potential benefits for university students' growth when they choose to leave the shelter of family. For one thing, college students can seize the opportunity to develop interpersonal skills, which can be a strong edge during the future fierce competition. Living away from home creates tremendous chances for students to communicate with peers instead of spending a huge amount of time on meaningless household affairs, which means students will gradually improve communication, problem-solving and cooperation abilities in the miniature community, laying a good foundation for later integration into the society. For another, individual independence can be stimulated and thus cultivated when living far from home, which can be considered as a symbol for adult identity. Once the awareness of being independent is generated among college students, the skills, from handling problems by themselves to making judgements independently can be mastered progressively.

In conclusion, for university students, living away from home exerts more positive impacts on the development of interpersonal skills and autonomy, although they should also pay attention to maintaining close family bonds.

(313 words)

【语言积累】

1.critical (adj.) 关键的

2.accomplishment (n.) 成就

3.alienation (n.) 疏远

4.estrangement (n.) 疏远

5.engage (v.) 参与

6.schedule (n.) 日程

7.involve (v.) 加入

8.timely (adj.) 及时的

9.negotiation (n.) 沟通

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