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10月14日雅思线形图范文:4个国家年轻人继续教育对比

2021-11-10 18:15:50来源:新东方在线雅思 柯林斯词典

2021年10月14日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task1:4个国家年轻人继续教育对比范文,供雅思考生参考。

点击查看》》》10月14日雅思写作task1题目回忆:4个国家年轻人继续教育对比题目

【图形分类】

线形图

【题目解析】

图形给出了4个欧洲国家的年轻人接受中学教育到18岁的比例。

难点:需要描写的数据变量较多,需要进行整合,作出必要的舍弃。

【写作思路】

开头段:转述题目

主体段:按照4个国家的数据大小顺序依次描写(突出相似和对比);或将男性女性的数据分两段描写。

总结:挪威的年轻人参与中学教育比例明显更大,而英国在这方面的增长是更明显的。

【参考范文】:

The graphs give information about the proportions of youngsters who attended school until 18, by comparing the figures for four European countries over the period from 1996 to 2003. Overall, Norway had a much higher percentage, while the UK had a significant increase in this respect.

The majority of Norwegians (over 90%) continued secondary education until 18, with little difference between the situation of men and women. From 1996 to 2003, the figures for both male and female students went up gradually, reaching 100% in 2000 and 2002 respectively. However, the attendance rate of boys had a sudden decline after 2002, falling back to just over 90% in 2003.

In the UK, male and female youngsters had a similar proportion of attending secondary education until 18, at around 65% in 1996. The figures for both groups had a remarkable increase in the next 5 years, going up to 85% in 2000, and remained at this level afterwards.

The situation in Italy and Spain was similar in terms of female students' attendance rate in secondary education. Their proportions fluctuated between 70% and 75% in the given years, without notable changes. By contrast, a higher percentage of Italian boys continued secondary education until the age of 18, climbing from more than a half to nearly 70%. This figure was 5% higher than that for Spanish male students in 1996, with a widening gap to 10% in 2003.

(203 words)

【语言积累】

a significant increase 显著增长

in this respect 在这个方面

attendance rate 参与率

a similar proportion 相近的比例

remain at this level 保持在这个水平

in terms of 关于

without notable changes 没有显著变化

a widening gap 逐渐加大的差距

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