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雅思大作文范文:富裕国家给予贫困国家援助

2022-04-15 20:52:28来源:新东方在线雅思 柯林斯词典

新东方在线雅思为同学们整理了雅思大作文范文之富裕国家给予贫困国家援助,供考生参考学习。

雅思大作文题目:

Rich countries provide financial aid to poor countries but this aid has little effect, therefore rich countries should provide other types of help.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【题目分析】:

翻译:富裕的国家给予贫穷国家资金援助是几乎没有效果的,所以应该给予其他方式的援助。

题型:单边选择(即:通常选择维持agree or disagree 其中一边的立场)

参考范文:

Helping poor countries and reducing poverty has been a global-wide common desire, and part of the solution is for developed nations to provide financial aid. However, the idea has been discredited that development can be achieved largely through funding alone. I strongly agree that we need to look for broader ways in which rich nations can make a difference.

The reasons why funding often fails to fulfill its promises are apparent. Countries struggling in poverty generally have little capacity of finance management, which can lead to misusing a large amount of money provided. Many of these countries also have a high level of corruption, making it less likely for the help to reach the general public. Besides, money seems irrelevant and insignificant when people are deprived of some basic needs, including food, potable water and sanitation.

Hence, the need to look for alternatives is beyond question and there are more meaningful ways to help the third world. For rich countries, sharing technologies in basic fields can be a powerful drive for improving the condition of poor nations. Technological advances in agriculture and infrastructure in particular ensure the livelihood of ordinary people in poverty on a daily basis, by increasing food supply and meeting daily needs like electricity. Another possibility is to construct and reform international trade policies, so that economically disadvantaged nations and their people have the opportunity, and for some, the motivation to improve domestic productivity and gain a share of the benefits derived from trade.

In conclusion, since the contribution of funding is indeed limited, I contend that other forms of aid should be considered by rich countries worldwide, in order to achieve a more effective and sustainable outcome in helping the third world countries. Alternatives like technology sharing and trade policies are both feasible and practical.

(298 words)

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.reduce poverty 减少贫穷

2.common desire 共识,共同的愿望

3.discredited 不可信的

4.make a difference 有影响,起作用

5.finance management 财务管理,财政管理

6.corruption 腐败

7.the general public 普通大众

8.be deprived of 被剥夺…,缺失…

9.basic need 基本需求

10.potable water 饮用水

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