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雅思大作文范文:城市住房短缺问题究竟谁解决

2022-07-05 15:14:12来源:新东方在线雅思 柯林斯词典

新东方在线雅思为同学们整理了雅思大作文范文之城市住房短缺问题究竟谁解决,供考生参考学习。

雅思大作文题目:

Housing shortage in big cities can cause severe social consequences. Some people think only government actions can solve this problem.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【话题分类】

公共政策类

【题目解析】

题目大意:大城市的住房短缺会带来严重的社会问题。有人认为只有政府行为才能解决这个问题。

题型特点:本题属于同意与否题型,考生须对上述观点表明立场并展开论述。

本文结构:开头段引入话题和表明立场、两个主体段分别论述政府主导和非政府主导方案的效果、结尾重申观点。

【难点】

本题话题并不陌生,但考生在审题过程中应该检查概念完整性,避免忽略only、severe social consequences等字眼,避免构思内容未能体现政府行为和其他途径的对比、细节内容能否体现相关的具体社会问题等。

【写作思路】

开头段:伴随着近几十年来的城市扩张,住房短缺已经成为越来越令人担忧的问题,并与贫困、污染和健康状况相连。一些人认为,这个问题只有当局参与才能得到解决。这种观点有道理吗?

主体段1:政府的资金投入和政策优惠可以解决住房供应不足带来的问题。并提供两个原因解释。

主体段2:相比之下,非政府手段的有效性和可扩展性要差得多。拓展解释常用方法及其弊端

结尾段:总的来说,住房稀缺程度之大,可能需要政府大量投入才能有效解决。通过政策和投资扶持,地方政府应该能够克服房源短缺,为居民提供舒适的生活空间。

【参考范文】

Along with the urban sprawl over recent decades, the housing deficit has become an increasing concern and has been linked to poverty, pollution and health conditions. This problem, according to some, can only be resolved when the authorities are involved. Is this view justifiable?

Government funding and policy preferences can tackle issues arising from insufficient housing supply. The main reason for this is that local councils regulate land ownership, building specifications and many other prerequisites of real estate development. If they incentivise high-rise building blocks and restrict permits for less space-efficient alternatives, this can effectively raise the number of housing units available on the market. Also, to reduce the population density in cities, long-term solutions can only be implemented with functional zoning. An example of this is relocating industries or residential zones to the outskirt, a large-scale project unachievable with government involvement in the planning and implementation processes.

Alternatives to government-led initiatives are, in comparison, much less effective and scalable. The most cited approach is reliance on the private sector. This could mean increased investment in new houses and apartment blocks, but real estate developers tend to prioritize profitability over affordability. Another possibility is that in the face of high-cost urban living, low- and moderate-income families may choose to reside in suburbs instead. This might reduce the financial burden on them, but the associated problems, such as prolonged commutes, may render living off-centre impractical for those who have to travel to the city centre.

In general, the magnitude of housing scarcity means that an effective solution likely requires substantial government commitment. With preferential policies and investments, it remains hopeful that the local councils will overcome the deficit and offer comfortable living spaces for the community.

(285 words)

【语言积累】

1.urban sprawl (尤指城市)杂乱无序地扩展

2.the authorities 主管部门

3.government funding and policy preferences 政府拨款和政策支持

4.insufficient housing supply 住房供应不足

5.local councils 本地议会

6.incentivize high-rise building blocks 鼓励兴建高楼

7.housing units available on the market 市面上的住房

8.functional zoning 功能分区

9.alternatives to government-led initiatives 非政府主导举措

10.to prioritize profitability over affordability 看中利润空间而非价格低廉

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