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雅思大作文范文:现在的人比以前的人生活更好

2022-07-19 11:12:31来源:新东方在线雅思 柯林斯词典

新东方在线雅思为同学们整理了雅思大作文范文之现在的人比以前的人生活更好,供考生参考学习。

雅思大作文题目:

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than the people who lived in the previous centuries.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

社会类

【题目解析】

题目大意:有的人认为现在的人比以前的人生活更好。从何种程度同意或不同意这个观点。

这个题目是“观点类题型”,要求考生明确表达个人观点。可以是“完全同意/不同意”,或“部分同意/不同意”。

笔者采用“完全同意”的观点,并在主体两个段中分别必出一个支持理由,同时再进行详细的论证解释。

【写作思路】

Para 1 = 题目改写 + 个人观点(完全同意)

Para 2 = 支持理由1

Para 3 = 支持理由2

Para 4 = 重申观点 + 总结主体2个段中的理由

【参考范文】

It is argued that individuals in the contemporary world enjoy a higher standard of living than their ancestors. Personally, I totally agree with this statement because modern technologies make people’s everyday living easier, and their increasing disposable income allows them to travel and participate in art activities.

The primary reason supporting my stance is that people find it convenient to lead their lives using various technological devices. There is no need for working adults to do chores after an exhausting day as robot vacuums and dishwashing machines can take the responsibility. Mobile applications assist people to not only order food from local restaurants, which can be delivered in around half an hour, but also to purchase various other goods from all over the world. However, these could not be achieved hundreds of years ago.

Another important point I consider relevant is that the public can allocate a proportion of their income to travel and take part in art-related events. In the past, people struggled for survival; they could only afford basic necessities despite having long working hours. In contrast, people now are paid fairly and well, which enables them to visit tourist attractions nationwide as well as worldwide to experience diverse cultures, and to frequently involve themselves in concerts and art exhibitions, facilitating their art appreciation skills.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that people’s quality of life nowadays is far more superior than that in the past. For one thing, advanced technological equipment helps them to deal with different tasks in life; for another, they are able to set aside sufficient money for a wide range of recreational activities apart from basic needs.

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.the contemporary world 当代社会

2.a higher standard of living 更高的生活品质

3.ancestor (n.) 祖先

4.modern technologies 现代可以产品

5.everyday living 日常生活

6.disposable income 可支配收入

7.technological devices 科技产品

8.working adults 上班的人

9.exhausting (adj.) 疲惫不堪的

10.robot vacuum 扫地机器人

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