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雅思大作文范文:城市居民缺乏锻炼的原因及解决

2022-08-02 18:31:43来源:新东方在线雅思 柯林斯词典

新东方在线雅思为同学们整理了雅思大作文范文之城市居民缺乏锻炼的原因及解决,供考生参考学习。

雅思大作文题目:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

It is difficult for people in cities to get enough physical exercise.

What are the causes and what solutions could be taken to solve the problem?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

社会生活类

【题目解析】

题目大意:城市中的人们得不到足够的锻炼。题目要求考生1)列出城市中的人们得不到足够的锻炼,以及2)如何解决这一问题。

这个题目是“two-question essay”题型,故全文需要四段,1)开头段(题目改写+文章结构概述),2)主体1(回答第一个问题,2个点),3)主体2(回答第二个问题,2个点),4)结尾段(总结全文)。

注意:主体两个段的篇幅需要基本一致。

【写作思路】

Para 1 = 开头段 – 题目改写 + 文章结构

Para 2 = 主体1

1)工作繁忙,2)运动设施不够

Para 3 = 主体2

1)雇主提供工作生活平衡的工作模式,2)政府在社区修建更多运动设施

Para 4 = 总结全文

【参考范文】

Nowadays, residents in urban areas find it challenging to participate in physical activities. This essay will initially explain why this is happening, followed by some strategies to tackle this issue.

There are primarily two factors behind why people do not do sufficient physical exercise. To begin with, they are busy with their work commitments. To make more money and gain promotion, employees always work extra hours, feeling exhausted and lacking the energy to exercise. Even on weekends and holidays, they prefer something that helps them unwind. Additionally, free sports equipment in the neighbourhood cannot satisfy residents’ demands. The land in cities is mainly occupied by commercial buildings and residential blocks, leaving limited space for sports facilities to which many people can have no access. Also, they are reluctant to pay for a membership to a gym and thus, cannot have enough exercise.

To resolve this problem, several approaches can be adopted. The first one is that employers ought to provide their employees with a better work-life balance. In other words, if individuals do not work long hours, they are more likely to spare some time to do sports on a regular basis, instead of focusing merely on their work tasks, which is beneficial to both their physical and psychological health. Another important point to consider is that the government should allocate a proportion of the budget to the construction of sports facilities in the local community. This will considerably encourage more residents to be willing to take part in some sports activities as it makes it free for them to exercise as well as more convenient.

In conclusion, being occupied by work and a lack of exercise equipment are the two major reasons why city dwellers are unable to do enough physical activities. However, if people can enjoy a balance between work and life, and sufficient exercise facilities can be made available near where they live, this issue can be coped with in an effective fashion.

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.resident (n.) 居民

2.urban areas 城市地区

3.challenging (adj.) 有挑战的

4.participate in 参与

5.physical activities 体育活动

6.sufficient (adj.) 足够的

7.physical exercise 体育锻炼

8.be busy with 忙于

9.work commitments 工作任务

10.gain promotion 晋升

11.work extra hours 加班

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