雅思大作文范文：外面和家庭对孩子的影响

新东方在线雅思为同学们整理了雅思大作文范文之外面和家庭对孩子的影响，供考生参考学习。

雅思大作文题目：

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Although family has a great influence on children's life, it is the influence of outside the home that plays a bigger part in their development.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】教育类

【题目解析】

这是一道观点类题型，其大意是：虽然家庭对孩子的生活有很大的影响，但是外面的世界对他们的影响会更大。从何种程度上同意或不同意。这个题目的的论证核心是"外面的世界对他们的影响会更大"，故观点可以是1）完全赞同外面的世界比家庭对孩子的影响会更大，2）完整不赞同外面的世界比家庭对孩子的影响会更大，3）家庭和外面的世界对孩子的影响一样大；笔者选择的是"完全赞同"。

【写作思路】

开头段：题目改写 + 个人观点

Body 1：外面的世界对孩子的智力发展比家庭影响更大

Body 2：外面的世界对孩子的社交技能和交流技能的影响比家庭更大

结尾段：重申个人观点 + 总结主体段两个理由

【参考范文】

It is argued that children are more likely to be impacted by the outside world compared with the influence from their family. Personally, I totally concur with this statement because the academic knowledge and social skills they can acquire from the wider community are more significant to their life-time development than what is provided at home.

The primary reason supporting my stance is that regarding children's intellectual development, teachers play a more crucial role than parents do. Teachers are known to have to ability to impart knowledge to children of different subjects. In math classes, for example, students are taught algebra and functions, which exercise children's logical thinking. Similarly, taking history classes allows children to analyse the causes and effects of historical events, helping them improve their analytical skills and critical-thinking ability. These skills are significant in children's continuous education and future employment. The majority of parents, however, are not able to do so as they are not experts in such areas, thereby being less influential on children's further advancement.

Another important point I consider is that social skills and collaborative skills, which facilitate children's future development can, to a larger extent, be cultivated via socialising with peers at school or participating in various activities rather than the interaction with parents. On campus, children may have conflict with their schoolmates, but will gradually understand and learn the way to get along with others if some of their behaviour prevents them from making friends. Meanwhile, there are many activities requiring cooperation, through which children can have an appreciation of teamwork. In contrast, family members shower children with endless love, seldom requiring them to share what they have and always helping them to do everything possible, which is of no benefit to children's development.

In conclusion, I strongly agree that the world outside home weighs more than parents in children's development. After all, the important factors in children's growth, including intellectual development, social skills and collaborative skills can mostly be nurtured beyond a family setting.

（333 words）

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.academic knowledge 学术知识

2.social skills 社交技能

3.acquire (v.) 获得

4.the wider community 社会

5.life-time (adj.) 一生的

6.intellectual (adj.) 智力的

7.impart knowledge 灌输知识

8.algebra (n.) 代数

9.function (n.) 函数

10.exercise one's logical thinking 锻炼某人的逻辑思维