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雅思大作文范文:看电视对孩子的影响

2022-12-25 17:28:37来源:网络综合整理 柯林斯词典

新东方在线雅思为同学们整理了雅思大作文范文之看电视对孩子的影响,供考生参考学习。

雅思大作文题目:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think watching television every day is bad for children. Others think it is good for children to get knowledge.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

话题分类

教育类

题目解析:

题目大意:一些人认为每天看电视对孩子来说是有害的,而另一些人则认为通过看电视获得知识是好事儿。讨论两种观点并给出自己的看法。

思路分析

这道题是“老题”,早在2020年就出现过。本题无论是话题内容还是出题形式都很常规,对于雅思考生来讲写作难度不算高。因为难度不高,写作时更需要将一部分精力用于筛选和组合,即思考清楚该写哪些信息、孰轻孰重、按照怎样的顺序去写。

两方观点都不能简单地用“对与错”去判断:对孩子来说是好(good for)是坏

(bad for),是从不同的出发点得出的结论。看电视这个行为本身是双刃剑,重点是有挑选、有原则地去看、扬长避短。

认为每天看电视对孩子有害,可以从以下原因去justify该结论:①每天且长时间盯着电视屏幕看会视力有伤害;② 容易沉迷导致心理问题,影响学习和现实生活中社交等; ③电视节目质量良莠不齐,差的节目起到坏的示范作用。

认为看电视对孩子有好处,可以从以下角度展开论证:① 好的教育类电视节目能够帮助培养孩子的想象力和创造力; ② 看电视是高效率获取新信息的好方式,比如新闻; ③亲子一起观看和讨论,电视时间就是高质量的陪伴时间。

写作思路

开头段:介绍背景,改写题目。然后表明个人立场:更倾向于后者观点,有选择性地看电视利大于弊。

主体第一段:阐述认为看电视对孩子不好的人的理由。该段落可以选择2至3个思路分析中的理由进行写作,同时可以配上1-2个例子。

主体第二段:阐述认为看电视对孩子有好处的人的理由。该段落可以选择2至3个思路分析中的理由进行写作。同时可以联系第二段中的观点,进行说明。如,诚然,一些电视节目对孩子有不利影响,但只要具备挑选电视节目的能力,就能够看电视中获益;不能因为有质量差的节目的存在,就彻底否定看电视的价值。

结尾段:重申个人立场,表示虽然看电视节目有潜在问题,但依旧利大于弊,值得一看。

参考范文

The discussion about how watching television programmes could impact on children has heated up recently. Some people are against this activity, whereas others are for it. As far as I am concerned, the advantages of watching TV undoubtedly outweigh its disadvantages.

There are two reasons why some people claim it is detrimental for children to watch television every day. First, it is widely acknowledged that too much screentime does harm to children’s eyesight. Scientific studies suggest that children should not be glued to television. Additionally, children’s psychological health might be impaired due to exposure to unsuitable contents. For example, violence and drug abuse are often shown in some films. Children who lack discipline or close supervision easily become addicted to the virtual world and might adopt an impractical outlook upon life, which has an adverse influence on their well-being.

However, watching television in face can be informative and educational for children. To begin with, watching news is an efficient way to know what is happening around the world. Saying no to television is a veto on getting informed. Also, TV shows like National Geographic and Animal World satisfy their curiosity and develop their creativity. Therefore, what matters most is being selective about what to watch and how. Last but not least, it can be quality time for both parents and children instead of a waste of time.

In conclusion, although there might be some health risks for younger generation to watch television for too long and too often, I still believe that it is a blessing rather than a curse; cartoons, films and a large number of programmes do enrich their life in many ways.

(274 words)

语言积累

heat up:加剧,类似于 intensify

outweigh:比…多,在重要性或重量上超过

undoubtedly:毫无疑问地

detrimental:有害的,可以替换 harmful

it is widely acknowledged that… 众所周知

screentime: 屏幕时间,可以指看电视或者玩手机的时间

be glued to:字面意思是黏住或者粘住,引申为长时间投入地做某一件事

impair:妨碍,削弱

discipline:自制力

supervision:监管

be addicted to:沉溺于,可以和 be glued to 放在一起学习

adopt a … outlook upon life:形成…的人生观

well-being :健康、幸福

informative:增长知识的,增长见闻的

educational :有教育作用的

veto:否定,否决

get informed:知情

quality:形容词,高质量的

blessing:幸事,福祉

curse:诅咒,坏事儿

enrich:使丰富

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