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雅思写作task2话题语料库:父母角色差异

2017-10-18 09:54:34来源：网络 柯林斯词典

　　【二段】父母对于孩子影响差异的原因展开

　　Due to the gender differences，parental roles vary greatly in a child’s growth. Males tend to more rational and tenacious, while females tend to be more tender and sensible, in this sense, a child can benefit differently from the parent. As a father, I always try my utmost to set a fine learning example for my child, what my kid can acquire from me is to be big at heart, cherish great ambition and rely on honest hard work to strike for those cherish-but-failed dreams. By contrast, seen from the role my wife plays, it is her unshakable obligation to guide our child to unite peers, respect the old, make a clear distinction between right and wrong. In addition，the distinct workload and pressure might account for the difference. Fathers, in most cases, have to stand out in career, hence, they usually allocate less to educating children, by contrast, mothers generally give priority to their families, thus, they will spend more time accompanying their children.

　　【解析】

　　1. Male tend to more rational and tenacious, while female tend to be more tender and sensible.男性更加理性和坚韧，然而，女性更加温柔和感性。

　　2. What my kid can acquire from me is to be big at heart, cherish great ambition and rely on honest hard work to strike for those cherish-but-failed dreams. 孩子从父亲身上学到心胸宽广、胸怀大志、为梦想不懈奋斗。

　　3. Seen from the role my wife plays, it is her unshakable obligation to guide our child to unite peers, respect the old, make a clear distinction between right and wrong. 从妈妈扮演的角色来看，她的责任所在是教育孩子团结他人，尊敬长辈、明辨是非。

　　4. Fathers, in most cases, have to stand out in career, therefore, they usually allocate less to educating children. 多数情况下，父亲要建功立业，因此，他们教育孩子的时间较少。

　　5. Mothers generally give priority to their families, thus, they will spend more time accompanying their children. 母亲通常更加重视家庭，因此，她们陪伴孩子的时间较多。

　　【三段】父母对于孩子不同影响的未来展望

　　Virtually，it is no easy task to simply predict the changes the parental roles in the future，for different families might have manifold conditions. One possible change might be that more professional mothers will appear when their families has accumulated enough family wealth. More precisely, more females are willing to return to families and wholeheartedly take care of their children. Another predictable development I can figure out is that parents will make joint efforts in educating and guiding their children no matter how busy they are because numerous parents might take fostering excellent children as their source of happiness and spiritual contentment.

　　【解析】

　　1. Virtually，it is no easy task to simply predict the changes the parental roles in the future 实际上，简单预测未来父母作用的变化绝非易事。

　　2. More females are willing to return to families and wholeheartedly take care of their children.更多的女性会愿意回归家庭，悉心照料孩子。

　　3. Numerous parents might take fostering excellent children as their source of happiness and spiritual contentment. 很多父母会把培养优秀的孩子当做是幸福的源泉和精神的满足。

　　【尾段】总结立场

　　In closing，parenting will always have many indispensable roles to play in shaping children’s character, establishing their life outlook and influencing their destinies. My firm stand is that all parents will take efforts and take time to influence their children positively. After all, blood is thick than water.

　　【解析】

　　1. Parenting will have many indispensable roles to play in shaping children’s character, establishing their life outlook and influencing their destinies. 父母在孩子们的性格培养，人生观树立，命运走向方面可以发挥不可替代的作用。

　　2. After all, blood is thick than water. 毕竟，血浓于水。

　　【全文点评】

　　本篇有感而发，自由写作，一气呵成。最后一句血浓于水，余音绕梁，可谓言有尽而意无穷，相信只有感动自己的文章才能引发读者共鸣。当作者没有博取高分的期待，当作者忠实于自我的感情，当作者只是想做一次真诚的交流的时候，可能，你也就在字里行间展示了你真实的水平。

　　本文严格按照题目指令写作，符合雅思写作四项评分标准。主题明确、行文通畅、逻辑清晰、论据饱满、文风朴素，偶以亮点词汇为点缀，可为雅思考生赏析之佳作。


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