雅思写作语料(新东方版)：初为父母是否需学习育儿课程

　　【范文赏析】

　　【首段】 背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

　　Parents are the initial teachers who exert a subtle influence on the character-training and mental growth of their children. Fine parenting is what every couple with child aspires after. People have been debating the pros and cons of requiring parents to participate in the childcare training courses without reaching any definite consensus. As I see it, even though ideal parenting will play essential roles in terms of children’s rearing, not every couple with child has to partake of the childcare training courses.

　　【二段】初为父母学习育儿课程的利好：

　　Indeed, I have to concede that some merits could be gained via encouraging parents to get involved in childcare-related training courses. The most striking merit is that these courses help the new parents acquire enough basic knowledge on how to see to a baby. It is conceivable that parents won't do improper things when caring the little babies, which can avoid the hurt to the babies. Yet, this is not universally suitable for every family with children, and sometimes the basic knowledge on baby-caring could be offered by other ways.

　　【三段】为何不是所有的父母都应该学习育儿课程：

　　Also，there are numerous social elites who seldom have time to take the training courses. Compelling them to learn the child-care related courses is not only a waste of their time but also a loss for their careers because they would generate less social value. Likewise, as for those who cannot afford the cost of the course, they could acquire child-care knowledge via books, TV programs or the Internet because these couples have to make a decent living and to feed their newly born baby. Lastly, Even though care training enjoys some merits, it might disturb the development of creative thoughts that parents conceive of to raise a child. In this sense, the new method might be misled by the courses.

　　【尾段】总结立场

　　Overall, my stand is that childcare training courses might not be really needed. Actually, when it comes to how to rear and educate children, the option should be more directly given to every individual parent.

　　【经典语料】

　　1. Child rearing is one of the key words in a family. 在家庭中，抚养孩子是关键词之一。

　　2. take part in the childcare training courses = participate in the childcare class 参加育儿培训课程

　　【解析】 the childcare class = the childcare training courses 育儿培训课程

　　3. acquire relevant childcare skill = learn relevant childcare technique 学习相关的育儿技巧

　　4. Parents are the initial teachers of their children who exert a subtle influence on the character-training and mental growth of their kids. 父母是最初的老师，他们对于孩子们的精神成长以及性格培养有潜移默化的影响。

　　【解析】 exert a subtle influence on sb 对于……施加了微妙的影响

　　5. Fierce competition and excessive workload sometimes will make it hard for some parents to participate in the childcare class. 激烈的竞争和过量的工作负荷有时候会使父母们很难参加育儿培训课程。

　　6. As for those poverty-stricken families，parents usually have limited financial budget at their own disposal. 对于贫困家庭而言，父母的可支配收入是有限的。

　　7. The participation of the childcare training courses will add financial burden to a family. 参加育儿培训课程会增加一个家庭的经济负担。

　　【拓展】 financial burden = economic pressure 经济的压力

　　【拓展】 impose much pressure upon a family economically 增加一个家庭的经济压力

　　8. Those social elites have to zero in on pursuing their career development. 那些社会精英不得不专注于事业的发展。

　　9. In this sense，inviting the professionally well-trained baby-teachers to take care of their children might be a superior choice. 从这个意义上，邀请专业上训练有素的育儿教师去照料他们的孩子是更好的选择。

　　10. Parental participation in childcare training courses could，to a large extent，strengthen the family tie. 父母参与育儿培训课程可以在很大程度上增强家庭的纽带。

　　【解析】 strengthen the family tie 增强家庭纽带

　　11. Parents will have a better understanding about childcare， therefore， they are more likely to enjoy harmonious and intimate relationship with their children. 父母们会对于如何照料孩子会有更好的理解, 因此，他们和孩子们的关系更加和谐和亲密。

　　12. Encouraging parents to participate in training courses related to childcare can enhance parent-child relationship. 鼓励父母们参加育儿相关的课程会增进父母和子女的关系。

　　13. If possible，all parents should undergo a period of parenting class . 如果可能，所所有的父母都参加一个阶段的培训课程。

　　【解析】 parenting n父母对于子女的教育

　　14. On the part of many extremely needy couples with children， life is a perpetual struggle against poverty. 对于很多有孩子的贫困的夫妻而言，他们的生活就是和贫困永恒斗争的过程。

　　【解析】 perpetual adj 永恒的

　　15. The debate reminds me of a documentary film played by the Mango TV station，which described some stay-at-home children in the remote rural areas. 这个话题使我想起了芒果电视台的一部纪录片，纪录片描述的是在遥远的贫困地区的留守儿童。

　　【解析】 some stay-at-home children 一些留守儿童

　　16. The vast majority of them live under the poverty line 他们中大多数人生活在贫困线以下。

　　17. What their parents strive for is only to enable their children to sustain the basic life need and receive better education. 他们的父母努力奋斗的目标仅仅是使他们的孩子们可以维持基本的生活以及接受更好的教育。

　　【解析】 strive for 为了……奋斗

　　18. Numerous instructive childcare-related programs can be available on TV and on the Internet. 很多有意义的和育儿相关的节目可以在网络和电视中获得。

　　【解析】 instructive adj 有教育意义的

　　19. We have to consider that individual family has different situation. 我们不得不考虑到个体的家庭有不同的情况。

　　20. In the final analysis，it is rather superficial to simply believe that all parents should be required to get involved in the childcare training courses. 分析之后：简单认为所有的父母都应该被要求去学习育儿培训课程是相当肤浅的。

　　【解析】 it is rather superficial to simply believe that …… 简单认为…… 是相等肤浅的

　　【作者简介】

　　薛鹏(雅思小鹏哥)，新东方网专栏作家，长春市作家协会会员。高中时代出版诗文集《选择坚强》，每年创作20万字原创语料库以及范文。吉林大学外国语言学及应用语言学硕士。17年英语教学经验 (7年新东方雅思托福SAT教学经历)，前长春新东方功勋教师，多次培训出雅思和托福高分学员(雅思写作8.0分，托福写作29分)。

　　爱生活，爱运动，爱音乐电影，爱旅行美食，爱读书摄影，更爱英语教学。20岁登上英语讲台，主讲英语万词速记课程。熟悉GRE、TOEFL、SAT、TEM、CET等各级别词汇教学。

　　大一时即在报刊杂志上主持“英语学习系列谈”以及“薛鹏教你学单词”等专栏。2006年获得“外研社/朗文杯”新概念背诵大赛吉林省赛区大学成人组冠军，全国总决赛大学成人组二等奖。

　　对于各类写作课程有精深研究，授课方式行云流水，妙语连珠，知识底蕴深厚，对学员极具有启迪性和激励性。

　　教学理念：Education is not the filling of a pail but the lighting of a fire.(教育不是注满一桶水，而是点燃一把火)