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2021年6月17日雅思大作文及范文:提高致胖食物价格控制体重

2021-07-01 12:30:39来源:新东方在线雅思 柯林斯词典

2021年6月17日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task2:提高致胖食物价格控制体重相关范文,供雅思考生参考。

6月17日大作文题目:

More and more people are becoming overweight. Some people suggest that increasing the price of fattening food is a solution.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【话题分类】

社会类

【题目解析】

题目大意:越来越多人超重。有人认为提高致胖食物的价格是一个解决措施,在何种程度上你同意这个想法?

题型特点:同意与否类题型,需要结合题目内容给出观点并提出针对性的理由。

本文论文推进:开头段引入话题,即如何解决人均超重问题。主体段首先陈述提高致胖食物价格的确能够一定程度上降低人们的消费欲望,但是这无法达到目的,反而增加了人们的生活压力,并且存在更有效的更根本性的解决措施,比如通过鼓励锻炼以及解决大众心理压力等。结尾段总结主要观点。

难点:注意结合题目分析solution是否成立。

【写作思路】

开头段:众所周知,肥胖问题一直困扰大家,超重群体越来越多。尽管有些人认为提高致胖食物的价格是一种有效的解决措施,我更相信其他措施才能根本性地解决问题。

让步段:诚然,提高致胖食物价格能在一定程度上抑制人们的消费欲望。

主体段:但是,更高的价格仅仅增加了普通消费者的压力,而没有达到解决问题的目的。因此,提升大众意识才能彻底地解决肥胖问题。一方面,通过电视节目的宣传鼓励大众规律地锻炼;另一方面,举办心理健康讲座也是非常必要的,帮助大众改变心态,从而摆脱由于心理压力而产生的肥胖问题。

结尾段:总的来说,尽管高价的致胖食物能够部分地解决肥胖问题,为了根除问题,人们需要改变生活方式和心态。

【参考范文】

As is known to all, the problem of obesity is haunting the public, with an increasing number of overweight population nowadays. While some people opine that increasing the price of fattening food can be an effective solution, I would argue that the other means can better fundamentally address the issue.

Admittedly, raising the price of food, especially those directly related to corpulence, can refrain people's purchase desire to some extent. Considering relatively higher costs for such kind of fattening food, such as burgers and cakes, residents may reduce consumption gradually, therefore leading to less fatty food lovers and accordingly less overweight population in the long run.

However, this solution can hardly uproot the obesity issue since it is impossible to stop public's crazy pursuits for fattening food when they have not raised the consciousness of healthy lifestyle. Under the circumstances, higher prices merely exert considerable pressure on ordinary customers, rather than achieve the goal of dealing with the problem. Therefore, enhancing public awareness can radically play a pivotal role in tackling the obesity issue. For one thing, through non-commercial advertising on TV shows, busy office workers can be motivated to exercise on a regular basis, which is an effective method to promote healthy lifestyles. For another, holding lectures on mental health is also crucial for the public to change their mindset and get rid of overweight problems caused by excessive living stress. If they are able to relieve their pressure through adopting other efficient measures, fatty food is no longer the kind of pleasure they can hardly abandon.

In conclusion, although pricey fattening food can partly help resolve the obesity problem, people should change their lifestyles and mindsets to fully eradicate the issue.

(283 words)

【语言积累】

1.obesity (n.) 肥胖

2.haunt (v.) 萦绕

3.fundamentally (adv.) 根本地

4.corpulence (n.) 肥胖

5.refrain (v.) 抑制

6.accordingly (adv.) 相应地

7.uproot (v.) 根除

8.consciousness (n.) 意识

9.circumstance (n.) 状况

10.considerable (adj.) 相当大的

11.awareness (n.) 意识

12.radically (adv.) 彻底地

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