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2021-07-30 15:45:10来源:新东方在线雅思 柯林斯词典

雅思大作文中,有一种比较冷门的作文类经常容易被大家忽视,这就是报告类的题目。然而但不代表你就可以直接放弃练习。今天新东方在线雅思就为大家结合了一道雅思写作真题来看看报告类的作文该怎么写。

报告类题目写作范文及解析

题目

Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it?

出现时间:2020年9月

解析思路

首先锁定这是一道典型报告类题目,属于"原因-方案"类,立刻在脑海形成四个大段:

开头段:改写题目,阐述话题的重要性

The problems associated with anti-social behaviour and disrespects for others have drawn constant attention in recent decades. For this reason, a great deal of research has focused on factors triggering these behaviours and provides keys for prevention and treatment. (改写题目)This essay is to analyse the dominant cause of social behaviour disorders, as well as feasible solutions to mitigate the situation.(表明后面会阐述原因和解决方案)

主体一段:提出父母对子女的教育是造成这种现象的主要原因,有的家庭对孩子的惩罚过重导致他们叛逆并走向冷漠和极端;现代家庭中的父母忙于工作无暇照顾孩子的情感,他们往往被电视和网络中的暴力或犯罪节目影响到。

Parenting seems to be the main reason contributing to this phenomenon. (原因1)In some families, parents utilize rigid disciplines and heavy punishment to control behaviours instead of teaching children how to correct their mistakes, which creates rebellious people inclined to be indifferent and risk-taking. (原因1解释) In other cases, as modern parents are becoming occupied with their jobs, they may fail to meet children's physical and emotional needs.(原因1解释) Most children are susceptible to prevalent media like TV and the Internet, watching programs full of violent activities and crimes. (原因2)As young children cannot distinguish between right and wrong, ill-mannered attitudes may emerge and develop without being controlled.

主体二段:有些措施可以缓和这种问题,例如家长援助组织可以帮助家长们用正确的方式教育孩子,提供相应资源和信息;地方当局也可以根据事件的本质和严重程度进行早期的干预,让人们处于安全的环境之中,远离困扰。

Accordingly, some effective measures could alleviate the detrimental influence on a large scale. (解决方案总起句)First and foremost, parent support groups could provide resources and information for parents to educate their children, helping to build upon families' strengths so that children can thrive socially and behaviourally.(解决方案1,对应原因1) In addition, local authorities could take early interventions on occurrences of anti-social behaviours, encouraging young people to stay safe and keep out of trouble. For example, mediation is a common practice employed for people involved in the case by discussing the problems and agreeing on a solution afterwards.(解决方案2,对应原因2)

总结:总结观点 + 简单解释说明

To conclude, anti-social performances and disrespectful attitudes towards others stem from inappropriate parenting education. (原因总结概括)When it comes to tackling them, parent support and early intervention should be applied to ensure a safe environment where people show consideration for each other and behave acceptably.(解决方案总结概括)

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