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2021年7月24雅思大作文范文:个人越来越依赖彼此还是更独立

2021-09-03 16:42:28来源:新东方在线雅思 柯林斯词典

2021年7月24日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task2:个人越来越依赖彼此还是更独立相关范文,供雅思考生参考。

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

社会生活类

【题目解析】

题目大意为"一些人认为在现代社会我们更加依赖彼此,而另一些人则认为人们变得更加独立。

本题在13年和16年都考过原题,是一道非常典型的双边讨论题目,在这个题目中大家审题的时候需要注意"more dependent"和"more independent",也就是要求考生讨论是更加依赖别人还是更加独立,在进行作文写作的时候,可以采用对比论证的方式来说明自己的观点。

【写作思路】

开头段:改写题目+ (自己观点),由于是双边讨论,开头段也可采用只引出话题不发表观点的方式。

主体第一段:论述人们现在变得更加依赖彼此的原因-彼此生活相互关联;生活繁忙,工作压力大,需要依靠其他人照顾孩子和打理家庭

主体第二段:论述人们现在变得更加独立的原因-科技和互联网的发展,人们从身心都变得更加独立

结尾段:总结个人观点,强调随着科技进步,人们的独立性会越来越高。

【参考范文】

It is generally the case that human beings are closely dependent on each other in modern society, while others believe our independence has increased to a large extent. In my view, people have grown to be more self-reliant and freer from dependency on others.

People who argue that we are more interdependent advocate that individuals nowadays live in an interconnected environment. Dependence on and cooperation with each other enhanced our ability to survive under harsh environmental circumstances. For example, no worker in a corporation is conversant in any field, so they would accomplish tasks by collaborating with others. In addition, some families lead such hectic lives that they work full-time under huge pressure. Surveys reveal that more and more youngsters are seen working in other cities for a better quality of life. They increasingly rely on parents for childcare and distribute household chores to housekeepers.

However, the view that people have become more self-reliant stems from modern convenience. Individuals tend to live a largely insular lifestyle since modern tools offer innovative solutions to most issues. They can perform multiple tasks by sitting in one place without counting on the assistance of anyone. For example, the World Wide Web enables them to search for information on their own instead of consulting experts; the GPS allows them to travel around the world without asking for directions. As a result, those who take advantage of modern technologies can theoretically become more independent.

In conclusion, although people are dependent in specific ways since their lives are intertwined with others, they lead more independent lives physically and emotionally on the whole. This trend is expected to continue as new machines and technologies develop.

(278 words)

【语言积累】

1.interdependent 相互依赖的

2.interconnected 相互关联的

3.harsh environmental circumstances 严酷的环境

4.conversant 熟悉的

5.collaborate with 和…合作

6.hectic lives 忙碌的生活

7.distribute to 分配给…

8.self-reliant自力更生

9.stem from 源自于

10.insular lifestyle 独立的生活方式

11.multiple tasks 多任务

12.take advantage of 利用

13.are intertwined with 交织在一起

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