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2021年10月9雅思大作文范文:团队运动好还是个人运动好

2021-10-14 19:19:07来源:新东方在线雅思 柯林斯词典

2021年10月9日雅思写作考试已经结束,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task2:团队运动好还是个人运动好相关范文,供雅思考生参考。

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think it is more beneficial for people to take part in team sports like football, while others think individual sports like swimming and tennis is better.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

社会生活类

【题目解析】

题目大意:有的人认为参与像足球一样的团队运动对人们有益,而另一些人认为参与像游泳和网球一样的个人运动更好。

这个题目是"讨论文"要求考生分别论证题目中两个观点的合理性,并给出自己的个人观点。

需要注意的是,题目中写的是"people"和"individuals",故要在广义上讨论团队和个人运动的好处,不能自行把讨论的对象缩小。

【写作思路】

Para 1:开头段 – 改写题目中的两个观点+简要说明个人观点

Para 2:主体1 – 讨论题目中第一个观点的合理性

Para 3:主体2 – 讨论题目中中第二个观点的合理性

Para 4:结尾段 – 总结全文+给出自己的个人观点并作一定的解释

【参考范文】

There are those who opine that participating in sporting activities played in teams is more crucial to people. Others, however, disagree, insisting that sports requiring individual efforts play a more vital role. In this essay, both ideas will be analysed before the presentation of my perspective, which is that people's involvement in both types is more advisable.

It is justified for some to favour the greater importance of team sports to people. The major reason is that their cooperation skills can be better sharpened. To defeat the opponent in a football match, for instance, members of a group have to employ collective power to score a goal, during which time they gradually learn how to work together with others. Additionally, people are likely to build a wider network of contacts. If joining team sports, school and tertiary pupils may know more other students while adults can meet participants from diverse work backgrounds.

On the other hand, it is also true that people benefit more from individual sports. To begin with, these activities can cultivate people's perseverance in a more effective manner. If a tennis player feels exhausted in a match, what drives them to continue is a determined will; this is the moment when their willpower is exercised. Moreover, people are able to enjoy a deeper happiness when achieving triumph. It can be explained easily by the fact that the only winner will not share the rapturous applause from audiences inside and outside the stadium.

In conclusion, I believe that both sides of the argument are reasonable. On balance, it is my firm opinion that not only should people take part in team sports but also individual ones. After all, while team sports encourage the development of people's ability to collaborate with others and create opportunities for them to make more friends, people can also possess dogged perseverance and feel greater joy in winning competitions.

(315 words)

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.involvement (n.) 参与

2.advisable (adj.) 明智的

3.importance (n.) 重要性

4.cooperation skills 合作能力

5.sharpen (v.) 培养

6.defeat (v.) 击败

7.opponent (n.) 对手

8.employ (v.) 使用

9.collective power 集体力量

10.score a goal 击中目标(进球)

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