2021年12月30雅思大作文范文:网络可以取代学校吗

2021年12月30日雅思写作考试已经结束啦，小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task2：网络可以取代学校吗相关范文，供雅思考生参考。

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can study just as well at home.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

教育类

【题目解析】

题目大意：能够透过互联网获取的信息如此之多，儿童不再需要上学，在家学习效果也同样好。

题型特点：本题属于同意与否题型。考生需要针对话题表达明确的立场，内容完整涵盖话题核心概念便可。

本文结构：开头段引入话题和表明立场、三个主体段分别介绍三个相关的理由、结尾重申观点。

【难点】对本题中涉及的两种教育/学习方式，考生需要讨论是替代关系是否成立。如果仅仅表达两者可以共同存在，未强调是否认同替代关系，则不属于完整扣题。

【写作思路】

开头段：一些教育学家认为，近年来互联网兴起和信息爆炸，为全面电子学习铺平了道路，并将最终使传统的学校教育过时。虽然这种新模式确实有独特的好处，但它不太可能取代久经考验的课堂教学方法，主要有三个原因。

主体段1：对在线学习的主要担忧是缺乏专业教育工作者的指导。在大多数情况下，网上提供的内容并非为了教育而设计，因此单靠家长往往不可能准确评估是否适合孩子。相反，经验丰富的教师能够更高效地策划适合孩子年龄段的材料和微调学习任务，以适应学生的需要。

主体段2：反对虚拟学习的另一个原因是在家庭环境中难以消除干扰。当坐在餐桌前看笔记本电脑时，家庭成员的闲聊和厨房里突然出现的噪音会转移孩子们的注意力，忽略学习内容。相比之下，专用教室和教师监督令上课时注意力不受干扰，因此从长远来看效果更好。

主体段3：另一个经常被忽视的因素是负责照顾儿童的成年人需要花费大量时间和注意力。许多专注于工作的父母往往很难花时间陪伴孩子，而父母一方在家带娃则可能导致经济能力不足。因此，许多家庭选择以学校的解决方案——而不是费尽心思安排在家里自学或为孩子报名参加云端课程计划——这种情况可以理解。

结尾段：总之，我认为学校将继续作为学习的主要场所，主要是因为有着上文解释的不可替代的价值。不过，混合式学习——在线活动补充而不是取代课堂教学——不失为适合数字原生代的解决方案。

【参考范文】

The rise of the Internet and the information explosion in recent years, according to some educationalists, have paved the way for full-fledged e-learning and will eventually make traditional schooling practices obsolete. While this new modality does have unique benefits, it is unlikely a viable alternative to the tried-and-tested classroom approach for three main reasons.

The primary concern about web-based tuition is the lack of guidance by professional educators. Content available online is, in most cases, intended for purposes other than education, so it is often not possible for parents alone to accurately assess their suitability for their children. Experienced teachers, on the other hand, can be much more efficient in curating age-appropriate materials and finetuning learning tasks to suit the needs of their students.

Another reason against virtual learning is the difficulty to remove distractions in the home environment. When seated in front of a laptop at a dining table, casual conversations between family members and sudden noises in the kitchen can divert children’s attention away from the content they are working on. In comparison, a designated classroom and teacher supervision can mean uninterrupted attention during class hours and therefore better outcomes in the long run.

A further, often neglected, factor is the amount of time and attention required on responsible adults. Many parents who are preoccupied with work often struggle to spend quality time with their children, while households with a stay-home mom or dad can suffer from reduced financial capacity. It is therefore understandable for many families to opt for a school-based solution rather than going through the trouble of homeschooling or enrolling their children on cloud-based tuition programmes.

In conclusion, I think schools will continue as the main venue of learning, mainly for the irreplaceable values explained above. That said, a blended approach where online activities supplement, rather than replace, classroom instruction can be a sound solution for the digital native generation.

(315 words)

【语言积累】

1.information explosion 信息爆炸

2.full-fledged e-learning 全面电子学习

3.make … obsolete 让……过时

4.new modality 新的模式

5.web-based tuition线上学习

6.curating age-appropriate materials 策展适合孩子年龄的材料

7.designated classroom 专用教室

8.responsible adults 负责（照顾儿童）的成人年

9.enrolling their children on 给孩子报读

10.venue of learning 学习场所

11.a blended approach 混合学习方式

12.digital native generation 数字原生代