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2022年9月24日雅思大作文范文:机器人对人类的影响

2022-10-09 11:55:45来源:新东方在线雅思 柯林斯词典

2022年9月24日雅思写作考试已经结束啦,小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task2:机器人对人类的影响相关范文,供雅思考生参考。

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that robots are very important to human's future development, while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

科技类

【题目解析】

题目大意:一些人认为机器人对于人类未来发展十分重要,但是另一些人认为它们非常危险并且对社会有消极影响。讨论双方观点并给出你的看法

【思路分析】本题考查机器人所带来的影响。在之前的题目当中曾经也出现过类似主题。关于机器人的讨论,大家比较熟悉的应该是在就业方面的影响,也就是会导致大量失业。此外消极影响也可以从安全性角度以及后期是否会产生智能危害人类角度,不过不建议写成很多电影或科幻小说中呈现的过于遥远的机器统治地球等内容。好处方面也比较容易想到,主要是在完成工作时的表现以及完成的工作种类方面,此外机器人目前也普遍应用在医疗、家用、娱乐等各种场景,将来会有更多的功能和潜力改变人类生活。

【写作思路】

开头段:改写题目双方观点,表明自己的立场。

主体第一段:说明机器人的广泛使用可能会带来的问题。主要是两个方面,包括事业问题以及突发情况时不能灵活处理问题,可能带来更大的损失等。

主体第二段:说明机器人能够为人类发展带来的好处。包括工作方面可以解放劳动力,并且完成危险和人类不能做的工作。并且在生活场景中的应用广泛也可以带来生活质量的提高。

结尾段:强调个人立场,表明新技术的出现总会带来很大的变化,但是机器人对人类的未来发展的重要性是肯定的。

【参考范文】

Our society has been undergoing numerous technological changes, among which is the rapid growth of the robotics industry. While some people express their concerns about the possible adverse impacts, I would argue that robots can offer vast benefits for humans’ future development.

On the one hand, the worry about the rise of robotics is justifiable, considering that jobs become casualties. As robots are versatile machines that often complete tasks with precision and ask for no perks such as insurance and paid time off, they appear more competitive than human beings in certain occupations. The assembly line in the automobile industry has already shown that the shift from human labor to machines can yield higher productivity. Another doubt people hold lies in the safety issue because there are situations where robots fail to handle an emergency flexibly but operate as they are programmed, causing damages that otherwise humans could avoid. These incidents inevitably lower people’s trust in automation.

On the other hand, I would side with others who have confidence in robots. Implementing robots benefit employees since they free workers from repetitive and tedious tasks and allow them more time for creative work and innovation. As for dangerous tasks such as defusing bombs or space exploration, robots save lives and go beyond human beings’ capacities, accomplishing what people cannot do. Additionally, in a daily life context, this game-changing technology has been adopted in the healthcare industry, assisting surgery or helping disabled and senior people to lead better lives. Its application in entertainment, households, and personal life is thriving, leading to further improvements in individuals’ lives.

In conclusion, as with any revolutionary technology, robots would give rise to drastic changes, including negative ones like job displacement. But new industries and businesses that people never imagined would also ensue. Therefore, I am convinced that robots will play a crucial role in humans’ future progression.

(311 words)

【语言积累】

undergo v. 经历,经受

express concerns 表达担忧

adverse impacts 消极影响

justifiable adj. 有理由的

casualty n. 受害者

versatile adj. 多才多艺的,有多种技能的

precision n. 精确,精准

perks n. 特殊待遇

paid time off 带薪休假

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