2023年1月28日雅思大作文范文:去偏远地区旅游的利弊

2023年1月28日雅思写作考试已经结束啦，小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task2：去偏远地区旅游的利弊范文，供雅思考生参考。

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Organized tours to remote community and other countries are increasingly popular.

Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and environment?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

社会生活类

【题目解析】

这是一个典型的利弊分析题目，大意为：到偏远社区和其他国家的组团游越来越受欢迎。这对当地居民和环境是积极的还是消极的发展? 通过审题我们可以将关键词标出：organized tours; remote community and other countries; local people and environment。很多利弊分析题目的要求都是让考生讨论某个现象的利弊，也有的利弊分析题会非常明确地将分析对象列出来，在这个题目中，利弊具体针对当地居民和环境，而非组团游这种现象。

【写作思路】

开头段： 改写题目+自己观点

主体第一段： 具体论述组团旅游对当地居民的好处

主体第二段： 具体论述组团旅游对当地居民和环境的不好之处

结尾段： 总结自己的观点+简单解释说明

【参考范文】

Package tours to distant areas and communities have gained popularity in recent years due to the beautiful natural landscapes and unique flora and fauna. It is argued that this trend benefits both local residents in terms of increasing financial resources and stimulating employment. However, I believe it can jeopardize the natural environment and the conditions of local people.

The main advantage of package holidays to remote areas is that it makes a significant tax contribution to the local government's budget. As a result, essential infrastructure, such as installing drainage systems or building hospitals, would boost local economy and raise the living standards of local people. Moreover, such development creates more employment in the local areas. Tourists visiting these regions generate a high demand for goods and services, which alleviate unemployment and provide alternative income sources for indigenous dwellers. For instance, local residents can earn a living by selling souvenirs such as traditional handicrafts or accessories to visitors.

However, when too many tourists visit natural sceneries, the environment and its inhabitants invariably suffer negative impacts. Firstly, constructing tourism facilities can drastically change the landscape of isolated regions, meaning habitat destruction for local species. An illustration of this is that local authorities chop gigantic trees to build huge entertainment parks and give way to widened roads. Also, massive hordes of tourists swarming these remote communities severely affect local people's living conditions. Tourists often leave behind plenty of wastes such as oxygen cylinders, leading to littered roads or clogged sewage systems. Without proper measures, the waste disposal problems will result in poor sanitation and disturb the region's ecological balance.

In sum, although the increasing package holidays to remote destinations can be seen as a positive development to individuals, it is more likely to exert negative effect on local environment. Policymakers should ensure that tourism activities have a minimal environmental impact, and such development can promote a stable and equitable economic development.

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【语言积累】

1.gain popularity 受欢迎

2.flora and fauna 动植物

3.jeopardize 危害

4.make a significant tax contribution to 做出重要的税收贡献

5.boost local economy 振兴当地经济

6.generate a high demand for 产生高需求

7.alleviate unemployment 缓解失业问题

8.provide alternative income sources 提供其他收入来源

9.isolated regions 偏远孤立的地区

10.habitat destruction 栖息地的破坏

11.give way to 让位于

12.massive hordes of 大群的

13.swarm （人）蜂拥，涌动

14.waste disposal 废物处理

15.ecological balance 生态平衡

16.minimal environmental impact 最小的环境影响