2023年7月1日雅思大作文范文:通讯技术发展弊大于利

2023年7月1日雅思写作考试已经结束啦，小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task2：通讯技术发展弊大于利范文，供雅思考生参考。

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

With the development of communication technology, such as smartphones, tablets, and other mobile devices, some people think the disadvantages outweigh its advantages.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

媒体类

【题目解析】

题目大意：通讯工具（智能手机、平板电脑等）的发展迅速。有人觉得这种发展劣大于优。从何种程度上同意或不同意？

这个题目属于“观点类”题型，要求考生明确表达个人观点，即“从何种程度上同意或不同意。考生可以选择“完全同意”或“完全不同意”，也可以写“部分同意”或“部分不同意”。

本文笔者观点为“不完全同意劣大于优”。全文共五段，主体段包括不同意的两个理由以及让步的一个理由。

【写作思路】

Para 1 = 题目改写 + 观点 （不完全同意）

Para 2 = 主体1（通讯工具迅速发展的好处1）

Para 3 = 主体2（通讯工具迅速发展的好处2）

Para 4 = 主体3（通讯工具迅速发展的坏处1）

Para 4 = 结尾段（重申观点 + 理由总结 + 建议）

【参考范文】

Individuals are utilising high-tech tools such as modern mobile phones to keep in touch with others. However, some opine that this leads to more downsides than benefits. Personally, I am partly against this idea because communication technology helps maintain people’s relationships with others and makes their work more efficient, although there are times when their work and personal life cannot be balanced.

The primary reason why I do not completely concur with the opinion that people using mobile devices brings more demerits than merits is that the bond between people can be strengthened. Many people have had to migrate to other cities or counties to work and study, making it impossible for them to see their family and friends easily. A smartphone, for example, allows them to give their loved ones video calls to share their experiences regardless of time and distance.

Another point supporting my stance is that communication devices increase people’s work efficiency. For one thing, bosses can communicate with their employees, discussing emergency cases using their portable devices when they are on business trips. For another, employees can also reply to their clients’ emails in time even if they are on public transport or vacation.

However, I believe it is also reasonable that such technology may blur the boundary between people’s work and private life. Although employees’ normal working hours are from nine to five, they may need to attend business dinners and email clients after work. Therefore, they will lose a large amount of personal time that can and should be spent with their family, such as cleaning the house and looking after children.

In conclusion, I do not totally agree that the enhancement of communication technologies results in more benefits than downsides. This is because people can maintain sound relationships with others and work with higher efficiency. I admit that workers may find it difficult to balance their work and life because of using communication devices, but this can be resolved if they properly organise their job tasks.

(333 words)

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.utilise (v.) 使用

2.high-tech (adj.) 高科技的

3.keep in touch with 与…保持联系

4.lead to 导致

5.maintain relationships with 与…保持关系

6.efficient (adj.) 有效率的

7.strengthen the bond between … and … 加强 …与…之间的联系

8.migrate (v.) 移居

9.regardless of 不管

10.increase work efficiency 提高工作效率

11.employee (n.) 员工

12.portable devices 移动设备

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