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雅思大作文范文：难以平衡工作和生活

2023-08-01 13:44:26来源：新东方在线雅思 柯林斯词典

新东方在线雅思为同学们整理了雅思大作文范文之难以平衡工作和生活，供考生参考学习。

雅思大作文题目：

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

People aim to achieve balance between work and other activities of their lives, but few are able to do this.

What are the problems in trying to achieve this goal and how these problems can be overcome?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】社会生活类

题目解析：

题目问的是为何人们难以获得工作和生活的平衡以及可以采取什么措施解决这个问题。

思路分析

可以参考的原因包括如今工作量比之前增加，由于竞争的激烈，公司层面需要获得更多的利润因此也会使得员工承担更多的任务。此外，科技的进步也让人们的工作和生活界限越来越模糊，人们随时可以进行工作，难以充分放松。

措施方面，可以让个人更关注提高效率，公司层面要重视员工生活，政府层面可以制定相关政策保障员工福利。

写作思路

开头段：介绍背景，改写题目。

主体第一段：阐述人们难以获得工作生活平衡的原因。

主体第二段：从个人，公司和政府的角度进行措施分析。

结尾段：重申个人立场。

参考范文

Many individuals strive to attain a work-life balance, but achieving it remains a challenge for most. From my perspective, this difficulty arises due to the influence of hustle culture and technological advancements in recent years. However, implementing various measures can help facilitate the achievement of this balance.

A primary reason why people struggle with work-life balance is the burden of a heavy workload. Intense competition in both national and global markets compels businesses to continually pursue market share and profits. This results in an increase in tasks, longer working hours, and added responsibilities, leaving little time and energy for leisure and personal life. Moreover, technological progress exacerbates the situation, as employees are constantly accessible and available through phone calls and emails, blurring the boundaries between work and personal life. This "always-on" mentality inevitably takes a toll on personal time. As a result, many find themselves grappling with burnout, increased stress levels, and a diminished sense of fulfillment in both their work and personal domains.

To address the challenge of work-life balance, concerted efforts from multiple perspectives are necessary. On an individual level, people should focus on improving their time management skills and prioritizing tasks effectively. By becoming more organized and productive, individuals can accomplish their tasks efficiently and create more space for their personal lives. Additionally, companies share the responsibility of supporting employees in achieving work-life balance. They can allocate workloads more reasonably and manageable and advocating a positive work culture that values employees' personal well-being. Governments can also introduce policies that mandate or encourage companies to provide adequate paid vacation and parental leave, ensuring the time for personal or family responsibilities without sacrificing income.

In conclusion, the challenges posed by fierce competition and technological advancements have made it increasingly difficult to maintain a clear boundary between work and personal life. To address this issue effectively, efforts from individuals, businesses, and governments are all crucial. By working together, we can create a more supportive environment that enables people to achieve a healthier work-life balance.

（334 words）

【语言积累】

strive 努力

attain 获得，取得

arise 产生，出现

hustle culture 内卷文化

facilitate 促使…的发生

intense competition 激烈的竞争

compel 强迫，迫使

exacerbate 加剧，加重

blur 使…模糊不清

mentality 心态，思想

inevitably 不可避免地

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